Inell ([info]inell) wrote,
@ 2005-06-09 18:21:00
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Entry tags:adult, all my fanfiction, hermione/sirius

Fic: Surrender (Hermione/Padfoot, Hermione/Sirius)
Title: Surrender
Author: Inell
Disclaimer: Rowling owns them all
Rating: Adult
Pairing: Hermione/Sirius, Hermione/Padfoot
Warning: Bestiaility Do not read this story if that is not your thing.
Summary: Lowering her head, she surrenders to the pleasure
Word Count: 635
For [info]cravache because she encouraged me to write this pervy little fic

His nose is wet as it brushes against her clit, her fingers curling around the soft cotton sheet beneath her. She can feel a trickle of sweat dripping down her back, her body shuddering as his long tongue licks her from clit to arse. Shifting on her knees, she spreads her legs wider for him, whispering, "More...I need more."

The world is dark, the blindfold covering her eyes remaining firmly in place, her other senses heightened. She can feel, smell, hear, taste everything in explicit detail. Feel the warmth of his heavy body against her legs and the back of her thighs. Smell the scent of sex and sweat and him. Hear his pants, her gasps, soft moans spilling eagerly from her lips. Taste the bitter copper of her blood from biting her lip on her tongue merging with the taste of him.

She can feel her fingernails against her palms, the thin cotton doing nothing to prevent them from digging deeply into her hands. His nose moves from her clit, rubbing against her wet cunt, his tongue following. She gasps when she feels him prodding her arsehole, her body tensing instantly, a soft murmur of , "No, not there," spilling from her lips, hoping he hears her.

He must because soon he is straddling her back, tongue licking the smooth skin, tracing her spinal column and wetting her hair. His cock is rubbing against her wetness, sliding against her clit as his hips move forward. "Yes, please," she urges, the feeling of fur rubbing against her sensitive skin as he suddenly thrusts his smooth pink cock inside her.

Drool drips onto her back as Padfoot begins to fuck her, her body pushing against his so his length goes deeper. She needs more. He‘s too thin, not nearly long enough, a low groan deep in her throat betraying her frustration.

"Sirius," she whines, knowing he can hear her, feeling his teeth grip the back of her neck, reminding her she's his. He bites down causing her to cry out, her head falling forward in a gesture of submission as he fucks her with speed and intent. She can hear him in her ear as he starts to change, fur giving way to warm skin and strong muscle.

"My pretty little bitch," he growls, his cock suddenly growing inside her, stretching her, going so deep she can't stop moaning and begging. His hands now grip her hips tight enough to bruise, her pale skin already showing bruises from their previous encounters, bites (both human and canine) are evident on her breasts, arse, hips. He pulls her back against him hard, her body trembling against his as she comes with a low cry, her cunt tightening around him as he keeps fucking her. “Mine,” he snarls in the low, threatening voice that tells her she’ll never leave, that he’ll never lose her, and then he comes with a whimper reminiscent of the dog that was just inside her.

Hermione feels his cock pulse, seed spilling, dripping from her reddened lips as he pulls out before slamming back in. She can feel coarse ebony hair against her arse as he grinds against her, not pulling out until he’s completely spent. Suddenly, there is light, the blindfold removed, her eyes adjusting to candlelight. Looking at him over her shoulder, he kisses her, claiming her, possessing her.

She gives herself willingly, his hands moving over her stomach and breasts, squeezing and caressing, rough and gentle, just like him. When he pulls his mouth free, she watches him change again. Soon, Padfoot's brown eyes are blinking at her, his face nuzzling her neck before that long tongue snakes into her cunt, cleaning his come from her. "I''m yours, Sirius," she whispers before closing her eyes, surrendering to the man she loves.

The End



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[info]mrs_remus
2005-06-09 11:35 pm UTC (link)
Ooh...very interesting take on their relationship. And very very hot!!! :D

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:51 am UTC (link)
Thanks, darlin'! Not only for reading but for enjoying it *G*

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[info]zaralya
2005-06-09 11:37 pm UTC (link)
I loved this Inell! :D Even if it contained bestiality. Well done!

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:52 am UTC (link)
Hee! Yay! I assumed the warning would scare everyone off *G*

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[info]zaralya
2005-06-10 09:08 am UTC (link)
Hehe, it nearly did scare me off - but I felt very brave yesterday night. *grin*

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[info]lunalelle
2005-06-09 11:49 pm UTC (link)
Since it's one of my favorite squicks that squicks both me and my readers, I feel compelled to comment.

Loved it. Despite the bestiality, the fact that Sirius was behind the animal body made every phrase more erotic, that he takes her with every bit of himself. The roughness, the possessiveness, so characteristic of Sirius, and Hermione letting him have his way.

Absolutely fantastic.

Lunalelle

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:53 am UTC (link)
Woo hoo! I adore you. You said exactly what I was hoping to capture, the mood and relationship, and the fact she accepted all of him. *hugs*

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[info]acquiescence_
2005-06-10 12:00 am UTC (link)
wow, I loved this it was a very good take on their relationship

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:54 am UTC (link)
Thank you! *grin* I'm so pleased you took a chance and read! Really happy you enjoyed it.

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[info]schmoo999
2005-06-10 01:21 am UTC (link)
Good God...Inell...lol. Great smut..wow and wow..good darling.
:) <3

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:55 am UTC (link)
Hee! I earned a Good God from my Schmoo! *G*

Inell

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[info]tesseract_5
2005-06-10 01:50 am UTC (link)
yoiks, porny little ficlet, very nicely done ;) I'm reccing :)

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:51 am UTC (link)
Really? Wow. Thanks! I didn't think anyone would read this one due to warnings, but the idea wouldn't go away until I wrote it. I'm sure you know how that is! *grin*

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[info]tesseract_5
2005-06-10 02:44 am UTC (link)
oh I'm a sucker for Remus/Hermione, or lately Sirius/Hermione ;) and padfoot doesn't squick me

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 02:47 am UTC (link)
I really enjoy Remus/Hermione and Sirius/Hermione, though I don't write them often. I used Padfoot briefly in Lose Yourself (a Sirius/Hermione) and it's one of my favorites I've written so...LOL...

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[info]swoosh09
2005-08-10 12:36 pm UTC (link)
Where can I find "Lose Yourself?" I tried to find it with no luck!

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[info]wildkatblue
2005-06-10 01:54 am UTC (link)
I like it! Very well written!

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 01:55 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]sunnyolaf
2005-06-10 03:31 am UTC (link)
I just wanted to say I really enjoyed this.

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 03:32 am UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm so glad *grin*

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[info]black_lust_z
2005-06-10 04:32 am UTC (link)
HOT, very hot.

Thanks for sharing!

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:31 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for reading! *grin*

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[info]rose_whispers
2005-06-10 04:49 am UTC (link)
OMG, Inell, you made bestiality hot. I must fangirl the pants off you now ;) I love the power dynamic here, and your beautiful, vivid imagery. Yay you!

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:32 pm UTC (link)
*snogs* I'm gonna be in that handbasket with you! Hee. Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it :)

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[info]hand_me_downs
2005-06-10 08:57 am UTC (link)
wow I loved this.

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:34 pm UTC (link)
Thanks, hon!

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[info]cravache
2005-06-10 10:12 am UTC (link)
Well, I told you what I thought of this in IM this morning.

akdglkdlgkdfg!! Such the Wrong and the Naughty. u r a durtee gurl :D Thank you so much for this beautiful bout of wrongness. I need more wrongness in my life.

Thank you, sweetie. You are a doll. *mwah!*

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:36 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Well I'm glad you liked my idea and encouraged me to write. I'm quite pleased with the finished product. I added quite a bit to what I wrote in five minutes yesterday (added about a paragraph or two) and I think it turned out pretty well and caught what I had in my mind. *G*

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[info]grrliz
2005-06-10 11:49 am UTC (link)
Here from [info]tesseract_5's rec ... I usually never read bestiality (I'm not squicked by it, I just have no interest), but I was pleasantly surprised by this! Well done!

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you were surprised in a good way *grin*

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[info]jess_rants
2005-06-10 12:37 pm UTC (link)
*WHEW*

You realy did capture Hermione's acceptance of Sirius and his posessiveness well! And wow what a steamy scene...

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:38 pm UTC (link)
Hee! You read it *grin* Thanks, hon. I'm glad you think it turned out okay!

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[info]ariadneelda
2005-06-10 05:28 pm UTC (link)
Here via [info]cravache.

Damn, this was hot! I love Sirius in any form. ;) And I loved how you wrote him here!

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[info]inell
2005-06-10 05:30 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I'd been wanting to write this idea for a while but kept putting it off. Toni told me I should so I finally did *grin* Glad you enjoyed it!

Inell

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[info]finnygan
2005-06-11 11:31 pm UTC (link)
I find that much, much sexier than I really should. I may just have to add you on account of that, if that's ok?

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[info]inell
2005-06-11 11:42 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't mind if you add me at all. Maybe you'll enjoy something else I write *grin*

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[info]magalamb
2005-06-15 09:06 pm UTC (link)
Although I'd never thought of their relationship that way, it seems like a natural extension after reading this... excellent. Really, very well written. I love your stories because they follow the cardinal rule of smut writing- it can't just be sex between any two people, it has to have something that make it just between those two particular people...

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[info]rosie_red73
2005-07-12 07:24 pm UTC (link)
Wow. I don't think I've ever read padfoot/hermione that actually includes penetrative sex before. Very brave *grin* I can't say the bestiality is entirely my thing but it was very well done and beautifully characterised, especially Sirius, with the growling and the posessiveness - HOT. Yummy.

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[info]inell
2005-07-12 08:17 pm UTC (link)
LOL...I haven't either, but it seems like such a way to surrender, to accept all of him. A bit kinky and not for everyone, and I certainly wouldn't write it often, but it fit well with this emotional idea *grin* Glad you enjoyed it! I love Sirius after the Veil, growling, possessive, keeping things he loves so close it's almost suffocating to them...*grin*

inell

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[info]raynala
2005-07-26 11:52 pm UTC (link)
Amazing! You know I make a backfile of old fics I've yet to read, so I generally go into the story not knowing the pairing. This was a great surprise! *grins* Awesome. As usual. >P

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[info]lilbreck
2006-05-06 02:46 am UTC (link)
They're in character, you're evil, and I might be just a little bit in love with you.



Tonya

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[info]inell
2006-05-06 02:49 am UTC (link)
Hee! *is loved* *preens* I really enjoy this pairing, a lot, and don't know why I don't write more of it! It's got such an interesting dynamic, whether it's post-Azkaban or post-Veil (if AU), and the passion is brilliant. "Lose Yourself" is the one I wrote that got me hooked, basically, and this was in a similar vein for the mental bits. Whee! *is loved and must preen more*

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[info]lilbreck
2006-05-06 02:54 am UTC (link)
I have to admit, possessive sex is a major kink for me. It makes everything just a little bit better in a fic, usually.

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